posts: Reword a paragraph in beton-brut.md

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@@ -103,10 +103,10 @@ experiment with being more immediately public with projects, ideas, or
 thoughts - even if you think they are unrefined and not ready. This is
 especially helpful if one tends to feel vulnerable after having
 published or when considering to publish. Initially it is perfectly fine
-to create a "mock public" space that no one can see initially, but which
-can be made more public as time goes on (a locked Twitter or Fediverse
-profile, for example). The idea is to build confidence in the act of
-publishing itself, and to take away the vulnerability and fear.
+to create a "mock public" space that no one can see, but which can be
+made more public as time goes on (a locked Twitter or Fediverse profile,
+for example).  The idea is to build confidence in the act of publishing
+itself, and to take away the vulnerability and fear.
 
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