posts: Improve wording and flow in zunzuncito.md

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/posts/zunzuncito.md b/posts/zunzuncito.md
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--- a/posts/zunzuncito.md
+++ b/posts/zunzuncito.md
@@ -6,15 +6,15 @@ Writing things is hard. So hard, in fact, that the dearth of posts here is not
 for lack of ideas or things to talk about, but instead for limits on how I want
 to spend my time. There are plenty of things I'd love to write longer posts
 about, but doing that takes at least three to four days if not an entire week.
-True, this is partly down to my obsessing over documenting everything and need
-to get every detail right, but in a sense I also cherish that, so I don't want
-that to go away.
+True, this is partly down to obsessing over documenting everything and my need
+to get every detail right, but in a sense I also cherish that part of me, so I
+don't want to outright suppress it.
 
 Clearly not everything needs that kind of treatment, however. Some things can be
 said with brevity and perhaps do not deserve an in-depth look at that particular
 moment. But since I've long taken this site as a space to write longer-form and
 truly developed articles, breaking with that notion here seems unwise and
-inconsistent - this site is just not built for short posts. Still, I have long
+inconsistent - this place is just not built for short posts. Still, I have long
 felt the need for a platform that is meant for that kind of content.
 
 ## Platforms aplenty, all broken